The main stick character needs something to show who he is, so you can pick him out of a large croud. For example, maybe he could be a certain color, or where something such as a bandana. Overall it was very good, but I couldn't follow it well because I could never keep track of the main stick.
I don't know...
Seems like a rip-off of ROTMK. The animation wasn't to great, I hated that part when Mario kicked the Koopa Troopas with one sprite pose. You bunched up a lot of the enemy sprites and they looked very odd, especialy the Koopa Para Troopas. The music wasn't compressed, causing the unnessasary file size. Some of the graphics were pretty sketchy. It was OK, but could've been better.
First episode of Sonic X is the audio..heh heh...nice.
That was nice
Good job! You say that was your first flash ever? You must have been expirimenting with it for a while, because that was good! Oh, and, do you happen to be related to the famous William Hung?
Stolen? No way. Freaking nubs...
Come on! Just because someone submits there first flash animation/game to NG dosn't mean it has to SUCK ASS, dose it? No. I swear, a lot of people who write reviews hear are illiterate n00bs... Anyway, I absolutely LOVED the plot of this animation, it was just hillarious! And the salesman voice... just... great! I hope you will make a "Disiplining your Sea-Weasels" episode! :D
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